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whiteboots2013
Posts : 99 Join date : 2013-02-14 Age : 62 Location : Japan
| Subject: Let's enjoy composing poems about Mao! Mon Feb 25, 2013 10:10 pm | |
| Title: The one who gathers light When I saw you for the fisrst time, you were an innocent child But you turned on the ice jumped brilliantly and successfully have gathered lots of joyful voice and won the applaude of the audience Classical and pop music Ballet Everything was in a harmony It seemed that it had guided your skating After being in twenties you have been attractive as a woman I have been a fan of you more and more Your expression have been deeper You have improved figure skating as an composite art Whenever you skate Light cames on the ice Your smile spreads the same simle on people When you skate Everyone is going to be one and wants to cheer you up That is because you are the special one who gathers light As the moonlight You shine people tenderly And graciously | |
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whiteboots2013
Posts : 99 Join date : 2013-02-14 Age : 62 Location : Japan
| Subject: Re: Let's enjoy composing poems about Mao! Tue Feb 26, 2013 9:20 pm | |
| I'm sorry I rewrite a little bit. Please join and I'm looking forward to your poems. Title: The one who gathers light When I saw you for the first time, you were an innocent child But you turned on the ice, jumped brilliantly and successfully, and have gathered lots of joyful voice, won the applause of the audience Classical and pop music Ballet Everything was in a harmony It seemed that it had guided your skating After being in twenties you have been more attractive I have been crazy about you Your expression has been deeper You have improved figure skating as an composite art Whenever you skate Light comes on the ice Your smile spreads the same one on people When you skate Everyone is going to be one and wants to cheer you up That is because you are the special one who gathers light As the moonlight You shine people tenderly And graciously | |
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whiteboots2013
Posts : 99 Join date : 2013-02-14 Age : 62 Location : Japan
| Subject: Re: Let's enjoy composing poems about Mao! Sat Mar 09, 2013 12:59 am | |
| Me, again But this time, I'd like to introduce my son's poem to you I have been waiting for your poems The Ice by blueboots1997 I remember Mao Asada Especially, the performance she danced with other skaters on the ice Still now, I don’t forget them dancing together Jeffery Battle was interesting like Toron actor Qing Pang and Jian Tong’s Liebestraum Alissa Czisny’s Moon River Their performance will be in everyone’s heart For ten years, a hundred year, ten thousand years Even now, the words “Power to the people” is in my heart Next year, again, Let’s enjoy dancing and singing Last year In Aomori They danced on “The Ice” At that time I think they smiled Next year If it is on in Osaka, I’d like to see The Ice | |
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whiteboots2013
Posts : 99 Join date : 2013-02-14 Age : 62 Location : Japan
| Subject: Re: Let's enjoy composing poems about Mao! Sun May 12, 2013 8:44 am | |
| Me, again....... "A flower on the ice"
On the ice You bend deeply and Pick up flowers with other flower girls
After a long day Despite the hard wall You overcome and smile
This is your hope Your mother’s And ours
Please never give up Heaven knows Who is the one
In my heart There is a flower Still now
It will never die The flower is real You are the only one Can achieve such a thing
I really hope You are not leaving so soon Your skating is everything
Your life Beauty And smile
There has been a flower since I saw you On the ice
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whiteboots2013
Posts : 99 Join date : 2013-02-14 Age : 62 Location : Japan
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l-spiralmao Triple Loop
Posts : 761 Join date : 2012-11-25 Age : 24
| Subject: Re: Let's enjoy composing poems about Mao! Sat Jun 22, 2013 6:51 pm | |
| Hmmm.... The first year: dynamic sprite Next few years: angelic beauty But then came despair Hopelessness Reinvention But at the cost of results Death. But with every tragedy, comes the ability to rise above it.And you didNow let's smile | |
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whiteboots2013
Posts : 99 Join date : 2013-02-14 Age : 62 Location : Japan
| Subject: Re: Let's enjoy composing poems about Mao! Sun Jun 23, 2013 6:51 am | |
| :cheers:Hi, l-spiralmao; I was moved to read your poem. Thank you very much for your quick reply. I felt lonely. But now with your poem, I feel more confident about sharing poems. When you are tired of too many words, information, or, if you want to take a break... Reading or writing poems will make your day better. Yes, there was no title of your poem... maybe, escape? If it is so, I want to escape, too. Your poem is short but deep. I like the following parts "But then came despair" "But with every tragedy, comes the ability to rise above it" In this case, it is "Death2, isn't it? I understand it means bad luck or something terrible. The last part "Now let's smile" sounds really soft just like Mao's smile. | |
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l-spiralmao Triple Loop
Posts : 761 Join date : 2012-11-25 Age : 24
| Subject: Re: Let's enjoy composing poems about Mao! Sun Jun 23, 2013 12:00 pm | |
| - whiteboots2013 wrote:
- :cheers:Hi, l-spiralmao;
I was moved to read your poem. Thank you very much for your quick reply. I felt lonely. But now with your poem, I feel more confident about sharing poems.
When you are tired of too many words, information, or, if you want to take a break... Reading or writing poems will make your day better.
Yes, there was no title of your poem... maybe, escape? If it is so, I want to escape, too. Your poem is short but deep. I like the following parts
"But then came despair"
"But with every tragedy, comes the ability to rise above it"
In this case, it is "Death2, isn't it? I understand it means bad luck or something terrible.
The last part "Now let's smile" sounds really soft just like Mao's smile. Thanks... The poem is actually a short summary of Mao's senior career... From jumping dynamo (2005-2006) to a delicate and airy sprite (2006-2009) to Bells of Moscow, jump technique changes, death of mother, (supposed) death of career (2009-2012), to the current Mao we all know and love. | |
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whiteboots2013
Posts : 99 Join date : 2013-02-14 Age : 62 Location : Japan
| Subject: Re: Let's enjoy composing poems about Mao! Tue Jul 02, 2013 7:20 am | |
| I made a new poem about love with thinking of the music of Mao’s new sp.
First love
Suddenly You appeared In front of me Like a dream
In my dream You came to me And touched me softly I couldn’t move
After I saw the dream, I felt you closer It was funny But interesting
I couldn’t imagine my feeling Without thinking anything deeply My first love came to me It was the beginning of our story
Day by day I came to know you You called me every night It was nice to listen to your voice
I really like your voice It hasn’t changed since I met you for the first time And your smile Forever
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whiteboots2013
Posts : 99 Join date : 2013-02-14 Age : 62 Location : Japan
| Subject: Re: Let's enjoy composing poems about Mao! Sat Sep 14, 2013 5:29 am | |
| Hi, Mao fans; this space is wide open. Please enjoy and compose your poems about Mao chan.
The reason why I like you
Lots of pressure Unreasonable criticism
Under these circumstances It is good to have a finish line
To live your true life To find your true love
You have been giving us Lots of beautiful things Uncountable encouragement
Last year I had a terrible time But thanks for your performance and existence I could keep going
Even though you retire, your spirit and art will be followed by others It means you will be in your followers
Graceful Spiritual
You will inspire And encourage people who suffer from their difficulties with smile
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roma Dedicated Mao Fan
Posts : 1810 Join date : 2009-05-07 Location : la-la-land
| Subject: Re: Let's enjoy composing poems about Mao! Sat Sep 14, 2013 6:20 pm | |
| Whiteboots2013, those are lovely poems. Wish I can write one but I've always been bad at it even in school.
Do you mind, though, if I include one or two in the photobook (with your name, of course)? | |
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whiteboots2013
Posts : 99 Join date : 2013-02-14 Age : 62 Location : Japan
| Subject: Re: Let's enjoy composing poems about Mao! Sat Sep 14, 2013 10:17 pm | |
| roma, thanks for your comments. I'm willing to:flower: You can select from here and please include them in it. I'd love to do it.
roma, Please join and express yourself as your poems:sunny: someday. | |
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whiteboots2013
Posts : 99 Join date : 2013-02-14 Age : 62 Location : Japan
| Subject: Re: Let's enjoy composing poems about Mao! Fri Oct 04, 2013 6:14 am | |
| Tomorrow
I read an article about you this morning My son told me about it yesterday I read aloud I found the truth You started skating when you were five You have never skipped any season I was so surprised
Tonight I saw you on youtube You look confident Full of energy
I realized You can make it Everything seems to be clear For you
You are ready for it
I pray for your skating I just pray For it
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whiteboots2013
Posts : 99 Join date : 2013-02-14 Age : 62 Location : Japan
| Subject: Re: Let's enjoy composing poems about Mao! Fri Nov 29, 2013 4:25 am | |
| Mao season
This season of the year is coming On the snowy ice You will describe your emotion Your love and your truth
Silver and white lines
Pure and perpetual movements
Sometimes soft Sometimes strong
Your way of skating So beautiful Beyond description
Happy holidays are coming soon The air is Cold and clean I like this season
Your real stage is coming in a few months
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whiteboots2013
Posts : 99 Join date : 2013-02-14 Age : 62 Location : Japan
| Subject: Re: Let's enjoy composing poems about Mao! Wed Jan 01, 2014 5:56 am | |
| I don’t want you to feel too much pressure We are not perfect Especially trying higher skills on the ice Nobody knows what will happen next I had never seen any competitions before Afraid to see their falls or mistakes So I only enjoyed the shows peacefully But when Mao made the decision I changed and have become stronger Enough to see the competitions directly To be one of her fans is so honorable To be there with her Along the rink side To call her name in a small voice I want Mao to feel happiness to skate After her each performance During the rest of the coming season | |
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ilovethai Triple Flip
Posts : 229 Join date : 2013-02-21 Location : Yuzu's Bedroom
| Subject: Re: Let's enjoy composing poems about Mao! Wed Jan 01, 2014 7:38 am | |
| If only I was this intellectually creative hahaha Your poems are stunning to read whiteboots2013. I hope I'll be able to make some poems when I have the time. | |
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whiteboots2013
Posts : 99 Join date : 2013-02-14 Age : 62 Location : Japan
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whiteboots2013
Posts : 99 Join date : 2013-02-14 Age : 62 Location : Japan
| Subject: Re: Let's enjoy composing poems about Mao! Sun Jan 05, 2014 1:54 am | |
| I’d like to see you longer
When I see you on the ice Your way of skating Your expression how you feel I just can’t stop watching you
I want to see your performance everyday As far as I have enough time Or the nights when I can’t sleep
The sound when you skate The ice is like singing lovely songs Softly and lovely
Even though when you fight on the ice I feel comfortable
I know you I have been a fan of you for a long time
Just like favorite music I need your performance everyday To live in this world in a better way | |
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whiteboots2013
Posts : 99 Join date : 2013-02-14 Age : 62 Location : Japan
| Subject: Re: Let's enjoy composing poems about Mao! Sat Feb 01, 2014 12:50 am | |
| Miracle
My dream is to see A smile which can melt frozen hearts On the ice Awakening Softly According to the melody Dramatically And at last
It is in a week Silently
Stars are shining in your Peaceful mind Every time Calm down I Am always with you Like a miracle . | |
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whiteboots2013
Posts : 99 Join date : 2013-02-14 Age : 62 Location : Japan
| Subject: Re: Let's enjoy composing poems about Mao! Wed Feb 19, 2014 1:56 pm | |
| Tomorrow
Will be another day
I was shocked yesterday But don’t worry You don’t need to worry about anything
Always You have been overcome such difficulties We believe in you
We are not so strong But believe me You are the real beauty
Nobody can judge your talent What a pity We also know your effort
I saw your perfomance directly three times last year I have never seen such a beautiful lady in my life
Oh, God Please give us hope Once again I’ d like to tell you
Nobody is perfect
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zarinaballerina Dedicated Mao Fan
Posts : 3545 Join date : 2011-04-29
| Subject: Re: Let's enjoy composing poems about Mao! Wed Feb 19, 2014 3:47 pm | |
| ^ It's beautiful, but how I wish the events would've turned out differently tonight, and you'd be composing poem about Mao winning instead of this. But as always, it's very beautiful. You are very talented. | |
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linglang Dedicated Mao Fan
Posts : 1505 Join date : 2010-04-27
| Subject: Re: Let's enjoy composing poems about Mao! Thu Feb 20, 2014 5:10 am | |
| whiteboots2013, it's so beautiful. Tank you so much. I can't help my tears. Hope tonight Mao will feel all the supports sent by people around the world. | |
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whiteboots2013
Posts : 99 Join date : 2013-02-14 Age : 62 Location : Japan
| Subject: Re: Let's enjoy composing poems about Mao! Thu Feb 20, 2014 6:35 am | |
| Thank you, zarinaballerina and linglang: I have been happy a little after reading your comments. Thanks for Mao, I can explain my thoughts with other people. It is great to face such encouraging people. With friends and co-workers, I could talk about Mao almost all day long. And it is still not enough. Suprisingly, so many people think about Mao. It is increadible. And no one around me said negative things. One of the co-workers put tiny flowers on the desk to heal my feeling. It may be a tiny thing, but cheered me up very well. Sorry, this is not a poem. | |
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whiteboots2013
Posts : 99 Join date : 2013-02-14 Age : 62 Location : Japan
| Subject: Re: Let's enjoy composing poems about Mao! Tue Apr 08, 2014 9:11 pm | |
| Spring has come
Under the cherry blossoms We walked side by side You said to me I was so happy to come here And be able to see Mao and other skaters
I felt the same
After the competition At station There were so many people filled with the space You guided me in waves of people Everyone walked so slowly Carefully
The night we could share the performance I couldn’t find any words except it was great.
At hotel We talked how beautiful it was Talked about many things Sometimes crying and smiling I could find a friend to share Things wonderful in life
Just like Mao said “Skating is wonderful” | |
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emory903 Double Axel
Posts : 151 Join date : 2014-03-02
| Subject: Re: Let's enjoy composing poems about Mao! Tue Apr 08, 2014 9:34 pm | |
| aww.. love that you put Mao's quote in there, in your personal journey of Worlds 2014 lovely poem, thanks for posting it!! | |
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